chapter1-19

posted September 19th, 2012, 5:21 pm


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August 21st, 2017, 2:48 pm

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September 19th, 2012, 5:47 pm

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THIS IS REALLY GREAT WOW

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September 20th, 2012, 11:15 am

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Hm..I wonder how strong demons are...

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September 21st, 2012, 12:44 am

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@preciouspenguins: thank you! >w<

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September 21st, 2012, 12:47 am

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@rinalicat: it will be seen in the course of the story :3

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October 13th, 2012, 11:29 am

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The story is entertaining, and one can figure out what is "meant" when Usagi speaks. Her lack of a native quality adds to her childishness in a way. However, I'm not sure if that was intended or not.

It's not a complaint, just a simple concern. Would you be okay if I pointed out things that a native speaker of (Americanized) English might find odd with regards to word choices? things like "for" in place of "over."

I realize "v" and "f" have similar dental-labial sounds, so if I imagine I was listening to it, I wouldn't find it off putting. I wouldn't want to offend you in a way. It would still make sense for an audio play.

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October 27th, 2012, 6:24 am

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The link between those two is awesome, and his facial expression when stuff goes wrong is Hilarius.

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